Well, it wasn't as bad as I was expecting, anyway. There was fighting. Shooting and explosions. I was hoping they'd kill a certain character off but oh well.
Might do a full post of Taken 2 soon anyway, but whatever. Here is the chapter.
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1.
INTRUDERS
Zathract
left the Sanctuary late that night. He had sat in his office for three hours over
his usual leave time, doing nothing but paperwork and reports. More and more
reports… For there had been an exceedingly large amount of murders in the past
two weeks. The Detectives of the Sanctuary had been stretched far and wide with
murder cases and ever climbing crime rates in the magical community. A certain
number of Cleavers were also assigned to each detective due to the potential
threat of their own murder.
Zathract
had been overloaded with work lately, so it was good was used to getting no
sleep for days on end. Tonight, however, he had finished off a good deal of the
reports he had to write out for the Sanctuary Records and decided to take the
rest of the night off. He hadn’t slept in five days, so he figured it was about
time to sleep for a while anyway.
He
parked his motorbike in the car park of the apartment he owned a room in and climbed
off, wondering how many new cases would be waiting for him in the morning…
Zathract walked over to the elevator and pressed the button to the 15th
floor. There were thirty floors in the apartment block, so Zathract was fairly
content with where he was. He checked his phone. Half past four in the morning.
Three
hours sleep. Not exactly the worst he’d ever had, he reasoned.
Zathract
stepped out of the elevator and made his way to his room, not bothering to get
a key. He didn’t have a key to his room. Zathract made sure that only he could open
the door to his apartment. His gloved closed around the handle and shadows
wrapped around it for a moment. Then something in the handle picked it up, and
the handle turned and the door swung open.
The
instant he stepped inside he knew something was wrong. He had no alarms set up
in his apartment, but he still sensed the presence of other people there.
The
room was warmer than it was in a natural state. People breathing.
The
place felt unnaturally prepared. An anticipated moment, waiting to occur.
A
sudden calm, forced. The need to be quiet.
Zathract
didn’t stop, despite the trap waiting to be sprung. He nodded ever so slightly,
closed the door, and stepped further inside, flicking the lights on as he did
so. The only difference in routine was that he left his protective jacket on.
He strode over to the kitchen and poured himself a glass of water, wondering if
he actually would get some sleep now that these people were in his apartment…
He
took a drink, then set the glass aside, and walked into the room that accommodated
a small couch, even though he lived alone. They were spread throughout the rest
of the apartment as well, he knew, but there were a fair few in this room.
“I’m
right here,” Zathract said, stepping into the middle of the room and extending
his arms slightly. “What are you waiting for?” Nothing happened for a moment.
Then a tall man wearing sunglasses and a black suit stepped into view from
behind a pillar.
“Zathract
Mist,” he said quietly, and a mixture of Cleavers and other men in suits
stepped out of hiding places.
“Who
are you?” Zathract asked, “What do you want?”
“You
are under arrest,” he said.
“You’re
a Sanctuary Official?”
The
man inclined his head slightly, and Zathract stepped back a fraction, frowning.
“Under
what charges?” he asked.
“The
unprovoked murder of two innocent mages,” said the man. “Come quietly now or we
will have to use force.”
“I
didn’t kill anyone,” Zathract glared. “I’ve been from one corner of Australia
to another in the past two weeks, probably covering similar cases to you. I
wouldn’t have had time to kill anyone even if I’d wanted to. You’re incorrect,
detective.”
“I’m
afraid not, Zathract,” said the man. “I have here a warrant for your arrest,
signed by the Grand Mage himself. I also have a document that ends your career as
a detective, also signed by the Grand Mage. You are currently seen as a national
threat. This will be the last time I say it. Come quietly or we will use force.”
Zathract
studied the people in the room. There was the man. There were about a dozen or
so Cleavers and about half as many other people, some holding weapons, others
flame.
Too
many too take down on his own…
Zathract
had his magic; his elemental abilities and Necromancer techniques. He had one
pistol on him and two knives. Not nearly enough.
But
it’d have to do.
“Who
were the people murdered?” Zathract asked. He’d at least like to know who he
was supposed to have killed if he was going to become a national-wide criminal.
“Come
quietly,” the man said. “Now.”
“Who
have been killed?” he repeated. Zathract wasn’t going anywhere yet.
“Two
mages,” the man muttered, annoyed now.
“Who?” Zathract stared daggers at him.
“Nixion
Strange and Sparky Braginski,” the man glared.
One
second Zathract’s head had gone numb, stomach had dropped and the world was
falling away from him in an explosion of confusion.
The
next he had leapt out the window of his apartment and was falling through the
air, floor by floor, putting space between him and the people intending to
arrest him.
Zathract
Mist was on the run.
*snorts*
ReplyDeleteAs if you could kill me!
I mean- I'm sure you could *pats Mist on the head*
I like it
Taken 1 was bad enough. Did you really like Taken 2? Don't you think movies need a bit more plot?
Yeah, just gonna ignore that first part. :P
DeleteI liked both of them. Sequels usually have bad plots, in my experience. They usually just try hard to live up to the first. Taken 2 wasn't the best plot ever, but it was a lot better than some others I've seen.
And Liam Neeson is always awesome.
Yay! I finally get to see Nix die!
ReplyDeleteI should just go kill you all... *nods*
ReplyDeleteAnyway, this is cool.
....
ReplyDeleteI'm dead?
That's no fun.
That's very cool Zath!!! very intaresting and exiting!
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