'Run' by Disturbed
3
THE
FIRST NIGHT
Our footsteps
were heavy on the ground. We had been running for over two hours and the army
of Hollow Men had long since disappeared from sight behind us, obscured by the
horizon. So either we had come so far that the Hollow Men had all but vanished
from our view or the sun, which had come out of hiding and was now sinking into
the land, was hiding them from our line of vision. Either way, no one dared
stop running. No one even slowed their pace, though Flame had begun to have
trouble keeping up around the one hour mark which caused Sparky to double back
for him more than once, getting increasingly frustrated with each time. No one
else stopped back for him or for anyone else that may have tripped or stumbled
along the way. The reason being because anyone that had fallen behind or fallen
over during the time we spent running that day knew that no one was going to
help them back up. And we didn’t. So they got back up and caught up again. I
myself lost my footing only once but when I saw that no one was stopping for
me, I felt a bit sorry for those of whom I had payed no attention to while in
the same position.
Another hour
passed of running, though around this point most of the group had already
slowed their pace and had begun to trail behind with Flame. It soon became
apparent we were going to have to rest, whether we wanted to or not. It was
only a question of when we would stop now and when Lavender suggested it a few
minutes later, no one objected. Most of us doubled over or else staggered to
the ground in a gasping heap but a few of us managed to maintain composure and
paced around for half an hour, cooling down and regaining breath, admittedly
very slowly.
Once I had cooled
myself down and eradicated the headache that had been nagging at me annoyingly,
I managed to focus on what we needed to do now. Of course, the first thought
that came to mind was “find water”, but a quick look over our new surroundings
told us that it wasn’t going to be easy to find, if indeed there was any around
at all. The sun had all but disappeared now and the last few rays of light were
slowly being sucked from the horizon. Bad. Darkness was slowly creeping in on
us from all sides now; bringing with it what was at that time a cool night
breeze which steadily transformed into a solid wave of extreme cold. So water
would be out of the immediate question. Some of us will go and search later on
- I thought – but chances are most of the group will want to rest right now. I
wondered away from the group still recovering to examine our surroundings in
further detail. The landscape was flat. Actually, completely flat. There were
no hills, not even small ones, no ditches in the ground, no change in the land at
all. This wasn’t good. It would provide no cover from the cold at the very
least, incoming enemy attacks at the most and didn’t offer even a hint of a
hiding place. There were no trees to duck behind, no formation at all. The only
thing on the ground was a soft layer of dirt which was completely covered with
grass. Not even a rock sat on a blade, no dying patches of grass as far as the
eye could see. The perfection of the place didn’t seem realistic, but then I
reminded myself that we were still in Blogland where practically anything was
possible.
Making my way
back to the others afterwards, I could see that I had been correct; all but
three of the group were all still on the ground, lying or sitting, still
recovering. Some were still panting… Nixion, Sparky and Lynxia seemed to have
recovered completely and were now doing entirely different things. Nixion was
seething and I could see his hand twitching, obviously yearning for the time
when he would seize the handle of his machete again and drive it through
whatever needed to die at the provided time. Lynxia had set her bow down on the
ground and was counting how many arrows she had left in her quiver. From what I
could see, there was still a sufficient amount left, certainly more than
satisfactory if it were me, but it was evident that the remaining amount wasn’t
enough for her needs when Lynxia cursed quietly and discarded them on the
ground next to her bow. Sparky was simply pacing, a glare set hard on her face
but otherwise showing no emotion of any kind.
“We’re going to
need some food.” I said simply to no one in particular once I was back within
earshot. “The landscape is basically flat so there’s nowhere for anything to
hide. If there’s anything out here, that is.” There were murmurs of agreement but
no one else spoke. “There also doesn’t seem to be any water sources nearby. I’m
going to go looking for something to eat or drink. If anyone else wants to
come, they can.”
I wasn’t leading
this group, but it certainly seemed like I was starting to. After I realized
that, I dropped the act and stopped trying to keep things organized. I didn’t
want to be leading, or even taking up something that resembled a position of
power, in this group. If my friends started making decisions based on what I
thought, then we were going to get killed. Killed sooner than later, anyway.
Another hour
passed, though, and even with Nixion and Sparky’s added help of searching, it
became obvious that there was nothing else living out there and no water
presented itself either. We returned to the rest of the group to find that
someone hard daringly lit a small campfire.
“What’s this?”
Nixion asked darkly, gesturing to the fire.
“It’s kind of
cold out.” Flame shot at him, foul tempered already.
“Yeah,” Nixion
said, firing up himself to match Flame’s set standards. “It’s cold. You can
choose, Flame. Would you rather be cold or
dead? Because if there’s any
intelligent things still looking for us then you’re basically flagging us down
for another bloodbath!”
“And who do you
think’s going to-?” Flame begun again, but Star cut in.
“Everyone shut up.” Ink said firmly, rolling her
eyes at Nixion and Flame.
More petty
arguments such as these stirred over the next few hours between all of us and
even those who tried to stay out of them as much as possible still seemed to
get caught up in them. Lavender seemed to be the only one who didn’t argue and
insisted on everyone “getting along” as she put it and whenever she entered the
conversation, whoever was arguing knew it was time to shut up.
There was no
breeze that night, but I remember it was still freezing cold. The moon was high
in the night sky, incredibly bright and illuminated everything in sight. I
could see the every blade of grass close enough in the exact same detail I
would have been able to with the sun out. Those of us who had specially made
clothing for protection were still as cold as everyone else, the jackets and
whatever else we had on offering no compensation of any kind against the
freezing cold eating at us. Eventually the campfire, which, despite four more
arguments over the thing after the original debate between Nixion and Flame,
had somehow remained crackling in the centre of our deformed circle, was
extinguished and someone suggested sleep.
Half of us seemed
tired, half of us were wide awake. Briefly, it was decided that we should all
take it in turns to take watch and to make sure that no Hollow Men or some
other foul thing would be coming for us. I offered to take first watch along
with Nixion, but Sparky and Eve ended up staying awake along with us while
Flame, Star, Lynxia and Lavender rested.
Conversation was
scarce in the three hours we sat up, watching and waiting that morning. And
when speech did show itself, it was
only to discuss whether or not we should start moving again. The question of
why the Hollow Men were there in the first place was still a matter to be
addressed, but I knew that no one wanted to talk about it. Taking it in would
still take some time for those who weren’t used to accepting abrupt things. And
then there was also the question of whether or not other creatures would begin
to invade alongside the Hollow Men, namely zombies and vampires. There wasn’t
much point in speculating though, so the conversations were petty and short
lived, started only to break the silence when it became too awkward again.
Eventually I sighed and stood up.
Muttering
something about stretching my legs, I walked off and away from the others. No
one followed; something of which I was grateful for. I think everyone just
wanted some time alone anyway because most of us had spread out quite a bit
since our watch started. I walked away from them and travelled further into the
new, flat plains. Though the night was still cold, walking seemed to compensate
or at least take my mind off freezing to death. The night was still and silent,
other than the faded sound of my boot meeting the grass again. It wasn’t an
awkward silence though, nor the eerie kind that had expanded around us before
battling the Hollow Men. It was a peaceful kind of silence.
If silence can be
peaceful…
I turned around
and looked back at the others. It would be a five minute walk back by that point,
but I didn’t have any desire to return yet anyway. I sought solitude, at least
for a while. I turned back around and then a bump on the flat ground caught my
eye. Normally such a change in the land around me wouldn’t have stuck out in
the slightest to me, but in this new flat place, the entire thing was
incredibly unusual. I stopped, mid-turn, and stared at the lump on the ground.
It wasn’t a part of the ground…
It was a body.
I abandoned
turning around and rushed forwards, confusion and panic surging through my
mind. We hadn’t considered the fate of the other people in Blogland. Could
someone else have been killed in the time before we had encountered the Hollow
Men? Could there have been separate waves, sent at different times to wipe out
whoever had arrived? What if some of our friends had already been killed?
I abandoned running
too and sprinted full pelt towards the body, dropping to my knees when I had
reached it. Whoever it was had been turned over onto their back. I saw blood
had basically drenched the hair of the victim, glistening in the moonlight. My
hands flew to the body and quickly heaved it over, dreading the moment when I
would have to return to the others with information of a death.
What if Ivy had
been killed? Or Gabriel? Or Johanna? Or Robin, or Lorelei?
But it wasn’t any
of them.
It was Dylan
Silver.
And he was dead.
Cool. :)
ReplyDeleteImpeccable.
ReplyDeleteOf course I'm last to comment, but now that I finished, all I can really say, is WOW. How you said Lavender doesn't join the arguments and when she does, it breaks, seemed really true to me. And Dylan being dead??? Wow, just wow.
ReplyDeleteSo cool! Can't wait for the next part! :D
One more thing, I just want to add one more word to it.
DeleteAMAZING!!!!!
Okay. Now I'm finished. :)
That was REALLY good.
ReplyDeleteI tell everyone to shut up! You're right, i WOULD have done that!
And dylan dying? That is just . . . *thinks of suitable word and can't find one*
It really gets us eager for more, so it's good you put that at the end.
i like it
ReplyDelete*thumbs up*
Good but I would keep arrows no matter how many. Otherwise. Awesomely awesome!
ReplyDeleteYay I'm not dead! And I was the first person you worried about!
ReplyDeleteThis is a really awesome story, Mist. You had better not stop writing it or I will hunt you down and gut you like a fish!
Sorry, I had to use a Mr Grinch threat right there.....
That is extremely clever Mist. You certainly have talent.
ReplyDeleteGood luck killing us all!
I didn't get time to tell you how utterly brilliant you are. Actually, I told you that already. *ponders this*
ReplyDeleteAm i gonna die?