I hope it's good enough. Nix, sorry for the previous chapters. It's not like that now. One last thing; Eve is no longer in it.
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Theme: 'Next To Nothing' - Breaking Benjamin
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5lESLPWgg_M
6
REVELATIONS AND EXPLANATIONS
Though the place was already in complete silence, this new
revelation of Ivy, alive, safe and seemingly unharmed, sent the entire area
into a new kind of stillness. It was not tense as such, but very eerie. I
remember standing there, staring at her for at least a minute while the rain
continued splattering all around us all before anyone spoke again.
“Well…” said another familiar voice from the darkness and Gabriel
Cobalt stepped forwards to inspect us for himself. “This is…unexpected, to say
the least,” The silence quickly swarmed back in and billowed around us,
solidifying itself again as quickly as it had been broken.
Then Ivy’s confused face frowned. It would have looked almost
normal for her if her eyes hadn’t narrowed at the same time.
“Who are you?” she asked suspiciously.
There was another stunned silence.
“Uh…” Lynxia muttered, bewilderment becoming apparent in her tone.
“It’s us, Ivy. Your friends?”
Ivy shook her head. “You look
like my friends, but my friends are dead. We already discussed that.”
The third figure still in the darkness stepped forwards and
Johanna Remus was thrown into view.
“Well, we were obviously wrong, Ivy,” she said. “Because they’re
alive.”
“Nope, they’re dead,” Ivy repeated.
“If we’re dead,” Nixion started. “How come we’re here?”
“Well you obviously
aren’t dead,” she said irritably. “My friends
are dead. Lots of Hollow Men and probably vampires too.”
She shuddered at the mention of the creatures before Lavender
started talking.
“But we’re alive, Ivy!”
she said. “We’re your friends!”
“Nope,” she persisted. “Friends are dead. Don’t know how you are.”
“Ivy,” said Sparky’s bored voice.
“Yes, Imposter-Sparky?”
“We’re your friends.”
“No you’re not.”
“We’re your friends,” she said. “And we’re not dead.”
“You aren’t my friends.”
“Fine then,” Sparky said. “We’re not your friends; we’re the
people who used to be your friends.”
Ivy looked at Sparky blankly.
“My friends are dead.” She said again and Johanna rolled her eyes.
“We’re not dead!” Sparky yelled. “If anyone’s dead, it’s you!”
Ivy stopped again, frowning.
“That…doesn’t change…” she started, but Sparky cut her off.
“Are you done being stubborn?” she asked, back to her tone of
boredom with Ivy.
“Of course not!” she said, and she started striding down into the
crater, drenched like the rest of us. “Stubborn is fun.”
***
No one went back to sleep that morning. We were all wide awake,
fuelled with the revelation of Ivy, Gabriel and Johanna. As it turned out, Ivy
finally stop accusing us all of being false imposters, even if it did take her half an hour to do so.
There was no more tension. There were no more cares, and the fire
was left to burn as it pleased against the ever-so-slowly lessening rain while
we busied ourselves with idle chatter. This ‘idle chatter’, I’m ashamed to say,
was actually a fierce debate about which pie flavour was better – beef or
bacon. Eventually, after a few hours of freelance discussion and ease, the sun
slowly made its slow ascending return into the sky, only just managing to send
light through the clouds that remained dense as ever. No brilliant orange light
was streaked through the sky that morning. It got slowly lighter, and soon the
fire was not needed, and was put out while the rain continued to patter around
us.
Soon enough, however, the main concern on everyone’s minds was
bought up, and the conversation was consumed by it again, only this time with
fresh news.
“What happened to you?” asked Star to either one of the three who
had appeared earlier that morning.
“Hollow Men,” said Gabriel. “And zombies. They came from nowhere;
none of us can work out how. We fought, they drove us back and we were forced
to leave.”
“Pretty much the same as us then,” said Nixion dryly.
“Happened to you as well then?” Johanna asked.
“Yeah,” said Flame. “But there weren’t any zombies.”
“Lucky you,” Ivy muttered.
“There were probably more Hollow Men for us to make up for it
anyway,” I interjected.
“So there were just you three there when it happened?” asked
Lavender.
There was a hesitation. Then-
“No,” Ivy said. “No. Izz was with us too. She got separated from
us when we decided to run. We, uh…we think she’s dead.”
“But then,” said Johanna, “we thought you were all dead as well.”
“Just Izz?” Lynxia asked. “No one else?”
“Actually,” Ivy muttered. “There was…uh…” she paused. “What was his name again?”
Gabriel rolled his eyes and Sparky raised an eyebrow.
“Well he kept changing it!” she said defensively.
“Oh,” Nixion muttered. “Yeah, we found Dylan…”
“Oh,” Johanna smiled. “Where is he then?”
“He’s, uh…dead…” Nixion finished, rather bluntly.
“Oh,” Johanna mumbled, her tone rather different to what it was a
moment ago. “Right.”
There was an awkward silence in which the rain took its chance to
become audible again.
“I don’t suppose you’ve heard from Izz then?” Gabriel asked after
a while.
“No,” Star answered.
Gabriel nodded and let Lynxia address them again.
“So, how long have you been on the run?” she asked.
“About a week now,” Ivy informed her. “There’s actually a small
city a bit back. We’ve been staying there.”
“A city?”
“Yeah…”
“Could you take us there?”
“Well, yeah, but it’d take a few days,” she said.
“A few days?” Nixion asked. “I thought you said it was ‘just a bit
back’?
“Well, it is,” Ivy said. “After you cross the desert.”
There was a pause.
“Right…” he muttered.
“We came out to get food,” Johanna said. “We were going to go
back, but then we, uh…”
“Got lost?” Star supplied.
“We didn’t get lost.”
Ivy corrected. “I don’t get lost. We
accidentally went off-course, and…uh…”
“Got lost,” Star repeated.
“No…” she muttered.
“So was there anyone else living there?” Sparky asked.
“Well, no,” Gabriel said. “That’s kind of why we went looking for
food. The city isn’t exactly a city. It’s more…the remains of a city.”
“Oh.”
“We’re planning on going back today anyway,” Johanna picked up.
“There’s nothing out here so we’re going to try the other side of the city.”
“So none of you have eaten for a week?” Lavender asked them all,
horrified.
“Oh,” Johanna laughed. “No, we’ve eaten. Water was a bit of an
issue, but we managed. On the second night we found a deer in this forest place
and last night we managed to find a rabbit. Not as big as the deer, of course,
but it was better than nothing.”
“Well…” Lavander sighed. “At least you have eaten…”
By now, the sun had probably risen pretty high up and, though it was
still raining, it was light, and it was time to get moving.
“We’re going with you then?” Nixion asked Ivy as most of the group
stood, some stretching, others looking around.
“I guess so,” Ivy said. “Anyone have any place better to go?”
No one said anything.
Ivy grinned.
“Excellent,” she said.
And we set off again.
***
The day was not pleasant. The rain was still letting its contents
down on us all as we travelled towards rather vague city, led by Ivy, Gabriel
and Johanna. Small puddles filled the shallow indents in the ground of which certain people seemed unable to resist
leaping in and sending water spraying everywhere. Admittedly, the rain from
above and the water sent from the sides did not affect much. We had not once
been dry since the previous afternoon, when the clouds had miraculously gathered
in the sky and had showered us with rain.
Nixion seemed to be a lot happier now, for he did not say a single
word of distaste to anyone, and was talking to the people around him with the
same ease and tone he would have taken back at Central, as if nothing had
happened at all. Perhaps it was simply the lack of water and the sun beating us
down that drove him into a lasting bad mood the past few days. Either way, he
was fine now, and remained that way for a long time, for days.
As did the rest of us.
The appearance of three friends acted as a stimulus for the rest
of us to keep going, because the last two days took a hell of a lot out of us
all. We had battle Hollow Men, almost suffocated in their released gassed, fled
Central and run for the rest of the day. Sparky, Nixion and myself had stayed
up that entire night on watch and we all spent the next day walking further
from Central again under the intensely hot sun beating down on us. The rest of
the group had remained awake the whole night while us three slept, but even
that was not for long before we were woken by Ivy’s demand.
Needless to say, everyone was tired by that time; everyone with
the exceptions of the three leading us to the city. Whether or not that was
because they had rested enough to last for long periods of time awake without
needed to sleep again or because they had already adjusted to the new
conditions we were forced to live in, I didn’t know, and still don’t. It was
kind of irrelevant at the time, however, and no one cared enough to ask them.
At least there was no overheating that day, especially compared to
the previous twenty-four hours…
Around three hours passed with similar terrain – the green, uneven
fields – before the desert Ivy had mentioned came into view.
“That’s the desert,” she said, not stopping as she crossed into
the new land.
It was a very sudden transition from plains to desert. It was as
if someone had drawn a straight line across the land and that was the only
thing separating the two clashing environments. One side there was green,
healthy and slightly too-long grass and other vegetation, and the other was a
barren wasteland with no life-forms in sight, though both were drenched to the
core.
The rest of us followed suit, but a few eyebrows were raised at
the sight of the sudden transition between the two lands. It was just another
example of how different the rest of Blogland was compared to our precious
Central that was probably now contaminated with filthy Hollow Men and zombies.
However, while the ground had been cut off abruptly, the sky had
no change whatsoever. Dark clouds still blocked any blue there may have been
from view and they still allowed the rain to freely pass from above and proceed
to soak us further.
It was a weird feeling, walking through the desert while ran
poured from above. Nevertheless, we followed Ivy, Gabriel and Johanna in the
same manner we had all been doing for the past few hours; lazily and half
asleep, dragging along, not caring about the distance between the current
position and the destination, simply longing to rest. Sleep was essential. And
none of us had gotten enough of it. There had been eager reactions when Ivy had
set off for the city while we trailed behind, possibly because, despite what
they had said about it being in ruins, it sounded safe. And if those three had
been staying there, as they had said, then it was most likely a place they
could rest in freely.
The rest of the day passed in silence with many squelching of
shoes against rain buried in sand and feeble attempts at conversation which
died out quickly. The desert was, needless to say, full of wet, soaking sand.
No animals were in sight and I didn’t see any pass on our way to the city. It
wasn’t flat, either, definitely not like the place we had spent our first
night, but it wasn’t as bumpy and ditch-y as the place we had been the previous
night. There were no trees, neither living nor dead. A dead place in Blogland…
Finally, hours later, another abrupt line brought another change
in environments. This time, however, it was not more grass. It was road.
Looking up, we realised we had finally arrived at the city.
The rain was really pouring down here and thunder growled and
lightning flashed across the sky. It was dark. Probably night, or else approaching
it fast.
The buildings were tall, or they would have been if most of them hadn’t
half crumbled to the ground. It was large and the whole thing looked rather
menacing, especially with the lighting striking everywhere.
“Quick,” Ivy said, command in her voice again and started to run. “We’d
better get under cover…”
Beef
ReplyDeleteStop apologising
This is great!
And Dylan... Am I the only one who's worried about him?
I must say, I'm enjoying watching from the sidelines. *munches popcorn* HA! I get popcorn and you don't!
ReplyDeleteYay!!! Thank you!!!
ReplyDeleteI didnt check my dashboard recently so I didn't read the last two posts. This was a surprise.
I wonder if Izz will be okay... That's cool you added an abandoned city. I wonder if it's really abandoned or if something or someone will already be there...
Other than the fact that Eve isn't in it anymore, I think it's cool!
I'm either hiding under a blanket somewhere or torn to long bloody shreds.
DeleteBe cool if I was a vampire or a zombie or something...
This is SO AWESOME, Mist. Really. I think you get Ivy perfect. Everything she said, all of her reactions were as Ivy actually would have done. I like how she just kind of stopped when Sparky yelled about her being dead, and then when asked to stop being stubborn she responded with "Stubborn is fun." That is pretty much EXACTLY how I respond to people when they tell me I'm being too stubborn.
ReplyDeleteAnyway, I think the story is really great. You lied in the other post! You said this one wasn't going to be as good! LIAR!
Can't wait for the next chapter, I wanna know what I just made everyone hide from... *eerie music*
I JUST REALISED THIS CHAPTER TITLE HAS THE WORD REVELATIONS IN IT
ReplyDeleteTHAT'S THE NAME OF THE FROZEN YOGURT PLACE.
Now I can picture us all standing in there and leaving to find the city.